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  • #16
    With the straw poll being completed, the next style is Celestial Monkey!


    I make martial arts sometimes they're in my Scroll of Mixed Martial Arts.
    I also made an entire 3rd circle and her soul structure.
    My repository of random media rip offs, from Anime to book series. Mostly Anime. It's all in my Manuscript of Merry Mischief.
    Total weeb.

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    • #17
      Your Hungry Ghost looks rad---I've been trying to convert it for my Abyssal thingy, but you've done it a lot better, I think. And also I've wanted Swaying Grass Dance since EX3 came out, so thanks! :U

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      • #18
        Originally posted by Beans View Post
        Your Hungry Ghost looks rad---I've been trying to convert it for my Abyssal thingy, but you've done it a lot better, I think. And also I've wanted Swaying Grass Dance since EX3 came out, so thanks! :U

        Haha, well i'm glad to hear it turned out well! It seems a lot of people wanted Swaying Grass Dance too. Enjoy and feel free to leave me a comment on the scroll or a PM if you have ideas on how to improve any of the styles.


        I make martial arts sometimes they're in my Scroll of Mixed Martial Arts.
        I also made an entire 3rd circle and her soul structure.
        My repository of random media rip offs, from Anime to book series. Mostly Anime. It's all in my Manuscript of Merry Mischief.
        Total weeb.

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        • #19
          I'm impressed by a lot of this. Noticed a few odd typos or phrasings, but these things happen. One sort of major thing though, your form weapons category needs to list if a style can be used unarmed. Corebook styles do except for styles that cannot. While I can imply most of these use unarmed by the charms it will cut confusion if you add that to the form weapons section.

          Also Water Dragon's Theft of Essence Method cuts off before giving the Gambit difficulty. Still reading most of it but wanted to chime in. Again, happy to see an effort, love some of your mechanics, just trying to help refine!

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          • #20
            Originally posted by Momoyo is Best Girl View Post
            With the straw poll being completed, the next style is Celestial Monkey!
            But I voted for Swallowed Darkness Style...


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            • #21
              Originally posted by Kurokune View Post
              I'm impressed by a lot of this. Noticed a few odd typos or phrasings, but these things happen. One sort of major thing though, your form weapons category needs to list if a style can be used unarmed. Corebook styles do except for styles that cannot. While I can imply most of these use unarmed by the charms it will cut confusion if you add that to the form weapons section.

              Also Water Dragon's Theft of Essence Method cuts off before giving the Gambit difficulty. Still reading most of it but wanted to chime in. Again, happy to see an effort, love some of your mechanics, just trying to help refine!

              Glad to hear you like the styles, and yeah, I tend to think faster than my hands can keep up at times so things fall through the cracks, or I forget how to english. Thanks for the heads up on the water dragon Style! I missed it and corrected it as of now. I appreciate the effort to help me make a better product. Thanks!


              I make martial arts sometimes they're in my Scroll of Mixed Martial Arts.
              I also made an entire 3rd circle and her soul structure.
              My repository of random media rip offs, from Anime to book series. Mostly Anime. It's all in my Manuscript of Merry Mischief.
              Total weeb.

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              • #22
                Celestial Monkey Style is complete!*

                *I tried to reign in the styles thematics being all over the place. Tried to focus in more on understanding of oneself, being carefree and understanding the flows of life and love kind of schtick. I may need to try and redo a couple charms to reign it in further.

                In the meantime, enjoy!


                I make martial arts sometimes they're in my Scroll of Mixed Martial Arts.
                I also made an entire 3rd circle and her soul structure.
                My repository of random media rip offs, from Anime to book series. Mostly Anime. It's all in my Manuscript of Merry Mischief.
                Total weeb.

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                • #23
                  Lunging Phantom Method looks too powerful for a charm without Terrestrial or Mastery. Its not unreasonable compared to Excellent Strike but are other Exalt types going to be entitled to similar tricks? I am thinking about Decisive Attacks in particular here.

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                  • #24
                    Originally posted by Bastet View Post
                    Lunging Phantom Method looks too powerful for a charm without Terrestrial or Mastery. Its not unreasonable compared to Excellent Strike but are other Exalt types going to be entitled to similar tricks? I am thinking about Decisive Attacks in particular here.

                    You could be correct on that. Perhaps I will create a terrestrial keyword, though on average the rerolls are each worth about 1 die per 10 dice rolled. Maybe i'll make Terrestrial practitioners unable to reroll 2's... Though in future, I have allowed people to suggest on the document. If you have concerns you should be able to highlight a section and make a comment or type over it to suggest an edit. Thanks for your suggestion!


                    I make martial arts sometimes they're in my Scroll of Mixed Martial Arts.
                    I also made an entire 3rd circle and her soul structure.
                    My repository of random media rip offs, from Anime to book series. Mostly Anime. It's all in my Manuscript of Merry Mischief.
                    Total weeb.

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                    • #25
                      Going to commit a bit of Thread Necromancy on myself, as for the first time in over a year i've converted another style. Night Breeze Style!


                      I make martial arts sometimes they're in my Scroll of Mixed Martial Arts.
                      I also made an entire 3rd circle and her soul structure.
                      My repository of random media rip offs, from Anime to book series. Mostly Anime. It's all in my Manuscript of Merry Mischief.
                      Total weeb.

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                      • #26
                        Interesting idea I would like to see what else you got

                        I don't remember where I saw it over the years but someone did create a mortal martial art that didn't use essence but just willpower and skill checks. Do you think you could come up with something like that since you have done work with conversions?
                        Last edited by Rahod; 02-18-2018, 10:49 AM.


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                        • #27
                          Momoyo IBG, excellent work.

                          I'm going to piggyback the thread necromancy since the audience that reads this thread would likely be interested in my 3e conversion of Falling Blossom Style.

                          So, undead pigs and monks who throw themselves between those they love and harm's way, for those who just can't get enough martial arts. Cheers!


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                          • #28
                            Originally posted by Rahod View Post
                            Interesting idea I would like to see what else you got

                            I don't remember where I saw it over the years but someone did create a mortal martial art that didn't use essence but just willpower and skill checks. Do you think you could come up with something like that since you have done work with conversions?
                            This is definitely something i've considered doing, and might actually attempt it soon.

                            Originally posted by Tikor View Post
                            Momoyo IBG, excellent work.

                            I'm going to piggyback the thread necromancy since the audience that reads this thread would likely be interested in my 3e conversion of Falling Blossom Style.

                            So, undead pigs and monks who throw themselves between those they love and harm's way, for those who just can't get enough martial arts. Cheers!
                            This is something i'll have to take a look at myself. To undead pigs and monks! Cheers!


                            I make martial arts sometimes they're in my Scroll of Mixed Martial Arts.
                            I also made an entire 3rd circle and her soul structure.
                            My repository of random media rip offs, from Anime to book series. Mostly Anime. It's all in my Manuscript of Merry Mischief.
                            Total weeb.

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                            • #29
                              Really like these. Had a browse and they all look solid!

                              Question I'd like to ask (purely for the sake of asking - I think the way you have designed it all is good as is), had you ever considered making some styles "Elemental Compatible?" Like - have the 'Enlightened' effects of Water Dragon style available only to 'Water Terrestrials'?

                              OR alternatively (I like limitations, but I know others don't so) have those Enlightened effects come with an Elemental Bonus for similar compatibility (e.g.: for Water Dragon "Ghost Restraining Whirlpool Stance's" enlightened effect; if the user is a Terrestrial Water Dragon, the addition cost is only 4m instead of 6m). It may complicate things, but it could also add a nice incentive for Dragons of certain Elements to practice styles fitting their Elemental force - while not being punished for practicing other techniques.

                              It could even be a tag for such Dragons to gain the benefits of even without Immaculate training.

                              But as I said, I like it all as is. Am glad you've had such great feedback. This is VERY impressive work!


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                              • #30
                                Notice that requirements for five dragon style are not the same in text and on the charm tree.

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