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  • #31
    page 34- "so the mortals sought a sense of control and security in the nature" should probably delete the "the"


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    • #32
      Kind of a minor thing, but could the Hsien cat please not be called 'meow'? Nekomata or any other actual term would feel less dumb.


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      • #33
        The font used for headers bugs me as hard to read, but it really bugs me that any special character like ü or á or æ look like they're not bold like the other characters are. Notable in the Dark-Kin and Nunnehi sections.

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        • #34
          Hello,

          Can you add this two backer names in Changeling 20th backer list please ? We have made a pledge (store level) with Trollune store (france, Lyon) :

          - Batronoban
          - David "Wush" Santiago

          Thank you very much
          Last edited by batro; 05-03-2017, 09:43 AM.

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          • #35
            Sure:
            There is a oddity in page 185. After title on probation, there is a table for animal features, and after a text on next page.

            Maybe:
            Faerie Eternity (1pt. Merit) (page 186), seems as 1 point, but previous edition, it was 5 point.
            Last edited by KokoroWatari; 05-03-2017, 09:29 AM.

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            • #36
              Originally posted by KokoroWatari View Post
              Maybe:
              Faerie Eternity (1pt. Merit) (page 186), seems as 1 point, but previous edition, it was 5 point.
              I see no mistake in this one!


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              • #37
                Page 55: "Changeling will create any raiment they need" should be "Changelings will create any raiment they need."


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                • #38
                  p 105, On Satyrs:
                  Looks like there's a missing word:

                  "For all their passion, they /KNOW/ nothing of true love or romance."

                  p 115, Step Three: Birthrights

                  The last sentence of the first section says: "The four categories of Birthrights are as follows:”

                  Immediately following, I see three categories: Acuity, Magic, and Advantage.

                  p 194 / 195 - Bunks:
                  The text on p 194 says: "Spending a turn dancing a waltz would yield a –1 difficulty in most circumstances, but performing an elaborate, ritualized dance at 11:11PM every day for three days would likely lower the difficulty by 5.”
                  The chart on p 195 says: "Repeating an elaborate ritual at the same time over 3 days” is -4
                  It seems like the intent of these is to be the same example; if it isn’t, then one of them probably needs a little clarification to express the difference.

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                  • #39
                    p3 - and friends don’t beleive in your true fae nature.
                    So how far will you go in search of wonders?
                    — Serhii “Selerian” Poroshkin

                    ----- believe !

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                    • #40
                      Wade-Giles Romanization has formatting that would change certain Hsien kith names. The Hou-chi follow it, but the Chu Jung should be listed as Chu-jung, the Fu Hsi as Fu-hsi, and as for the Chu-ih-yu, ih alone isn't a sound in Mandarin. Literally; an -ih ending indicates empty rime, where you draw out the sound of the preceding consonant paired to the vowel instead of having a vowel sound, so if there's no consonant, there's no sound (so the name of the Shih demon hunters, for example, sounds like a clipped version of the English word "sure"). I also remain very sure that Ch'ih-yu would be a better choice for the kith name, since the Wormy Rebel is a figure of legend in keeping with some of the other kamuii's names, and was typically depicted as a man with metal skin.

                      (Heng Po appears to be in Hanyu Pinyin. It gets to stand out without the dash. Also, po is pronounced more like paw than poe; the latter would be pou.)

                      Edit: Also, hsien-jin sounds like it might be treading on the same poor ground as the term Kuei-jin. The Mandarin reading, assuming you're looking for "person", would be hsien-jen.

                      Edit 2: Also, shui-jen instead of suijen, unless you're changing it to the Japanese Suijin (lit. water deities).

                      Edit 3: Probably the last silent addition, but would it perhaps be possible to change the seeming hsien-jin to hsien-jen (assuming that you meant 人)?
                      Last edited by Saur Ops Specialist; 05-17-2017, 11:18 AM.

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                      • #41
                        on page 366 it says that Pervasive Paracosm-Fixation Disorder was created to rationalize the naturali abilitys of kithain kinain and fae touched... but it doesnt, rationalize their abilitys at all just their beliefs so I think this is a typo...


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                        • #42
                          p.42 - Dream Dance is first mentioned, under the section heading of the same name, in lower case italics. Subsequent renderings are with capital letters. It should probably be capitalised?

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                          • #43
                            Page 51 - after the paragraph on House Varich, there's an indentation error. The next paragraph is tabbed too far in and there's no space between the paragraphs.

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                            • #44
                              Originally posted by Prince of the Night View Post
                              on page 366 it says that Pervasive Paracosm-Fixation Disorder was created to rationalize the naturali abilitys of kithain kinain and fae touched... but it doesnt, rationalize their abilitys at all just their beliefs so I think this is a typo...
                              The text is correct. PPFD attempts to rationalize the natural abilities of people who can see the Dreaming, not people who believe they can see the Dreaming.


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                              • #45
                                p.46, last paragraph - 'Changeling way' should be Changeling Way?

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