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  • [V5] I'd like to have feedback on a custom Loresheet (Cult of Iontius)

    So, for my chronicle, I created a custom Loresheet for the Cult of Iontius and I'd like to get some constructive feedback on it.

    It tried to base it as closely as possible on existing Loresheets although they are hardly consistent with regard to balancing. (The 4-point Merit is actually a shortened version of the Menelean Merit.)

    What do you think?



    (By the way, the tenets of the Cult might be familiar to some of you. )

  • #2
    I noticed one point myself...

    Under ●●●●● it should probably say "sexual intercourse with a mortal lover."

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    • #3
      This looks good. It's not too OP or anything. At level three, there's a missed word: "without [a] Rouse Check".

      That's it. The rest is good and very flavoursome.


      Writer, publisher, performer
      Mostly he/his, sometimes she/her IRL https://adam-lowe.com

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      • #4
        Originally posted by adambeyoncelowe View Post
        This looks good. It's not too OP or anything. At level three, there's a missed word: "without [a] Rouse Check".

        That's it. The rest is good and very flavoursome.
        Thanks, Adam! 🙂

        Here's the updated version:
        Last edited by Caldorian; 05-24-2022, 02:04 PM.

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        • #5
          I take it you have read my thread on Iontius

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          • #6
            Originally posted by Trollroot View Post
            I take it you have read my thread on Iontius
            Yeah, I read that when I had decided that I wanted to have a descendant of Iontius play a major role in my chronicle.

            I don't agree with your conclusion that he's Arikel (as is obvious from my Loresheet, I think Iontius is a follower of the Thrashing Dragon Dharma instead), but you made some good points.
            Last edited by Caldorian; 05-25-2022, 12:42 AM.

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            • #7
              Nice. I've saved this. Thank you!


              Writer, publisher, performer
              Mostly he/his, sometimes she/her IRL https://adam-lowe.com

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