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  • IanWatson
    started a topic Night Horrors: Enemy Action errata thread

    Night Horrors: Enemy Action errata thread

    Please report any errata you encounter in your readthrough of Enemy Action here. Note that this thread is for errata reports only: please take discussion elsewhere. Likewise, if something is a matter of opinion -- you would have phrased something differently than the writer -- that's not errata.

  • Second Chances
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    Pg 144, second paragraph: "...be caught by the God-Machine and life.." should be "...be caught by the God-Machine and live..."

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  • shkspr1048
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    P.80: the words 'organic materials.' have been laid out so as to be buried beneath the entry header design for The Gardener, when they should be brought back up to finish Ophelia Adder's Bane.

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  • Yossarian
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    p. 54: "...when Nothiel openly ensures that the Agency receives the resources and communications to where they’re needed..." -- cut the to
    p. 54: "...the involvement of the distant and private Psychopomp seem easy to dismiss." -- should be seems
    p. 54: "...their word is that it is Wednesday’s planning and reconnaissance is entirely the reason such miracles occurred..." -- cut the "it is"
    p. 57: "If she used it to infiltrate an organization of their ritual, she’ll feel motivated to earn that ritual." -- should be for
    p. 62: "...(see Heir to Hell, pp. 17-18)." -- should be Heirs; hyphen should be an en-dash

    My fault:

    p. 32:
    "...but undermining his credibility has always been the most effective with threats to her power." -- missing words; add method (or similar) after "effective", and Kelvin's after "with"
    p. 42: "Once, a demon CIS member referred to as Mr. Painter" -- should be "Once, a demon CIS members refer to as Mr. Painter" (i.e., Painter wasn't a CIS member, it's just the name CIS use for him)

    Last edited by Yossarian; 03-11-2018, 07:22 PM.

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  • tasti man LH
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    p. 26 "In a place hidden from the eyes of man he discovered the Its machinery..."

    Remove "the".

    "Was he independent, or was he just one of voices screaming for more sensation?"

    Insert "the" between "one" and "of".
    Last edited by tasti man LH; 03-11-2018, 04:50 AM.

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  • tasti man LH
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    p. 20 "...though this might simply because they tend to be magnet for compromise."

    Insert "be" in between "simply" and "because".

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  • Yossarian
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    p. 14: "A stalwart shield, Mme Wong only hopes to fulfill her duty and proves that she is a loyal servant of the God-Machine." -- should be prove
    p. 54: "Started and co-lead with the elder demon Cacus..." -- should be led

    Last edited by Yossarian; 03-10-2018, 10:24 PM.

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  • White Oak Dragon
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    Page 134: In the attack block, the note in the Grapple section reads "O-pponent may only attempt to Break Free". Opponent shouldn't have a - in it.

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  • White Oak Dragon
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    Page 130: In the Infection paragraph, in the sentence that begins with "The resistance roll suffers additional −1 penalties for each level of lethal or aggravated damage the victim has suffered," the − is currently displaying as a narrow rectangle.

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  • Second Chances
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    Page 76, second rumour: "He doesn't remember signing" should probably be "he doesn't remember singing"

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  • Lykas
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    Page 83:
    "Influence: Interpersonal Drama " there is the number missing

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  • Second Chances
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    Page 64: the w in woman in the last sentence of the paragraph about Du is being partially cut off by the image
    Last edited by Second Chances; 03-08-2018, 01:46 PM.

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  • Yossarian
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    Originally posted by AceOfAlmonds View Post
    p. 96: It feels like there's a paragraph missing after the first in Background; there's a floating a at the start of the second paragraph, and the content of the two doesn't flow.
    I just checked the drafts I've got access to and there's definitely a paragraph missing. I don't think it was cut intentionally? It explains a lot of details.

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  • AceOfAlmonds
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    p. 96: It feels like there's a paragraph missing after the first in Background; there's a floating a at the start of the second paragraph, and the content of the two doesn't flow.

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  • Yossarian
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    p. 14: The header says "Chapter Four: Highway to Hell" instead of "Introduction"

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