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  • Dreams of Avarice backer PDF errata

    If you catch any typos or visual glitches in the backer PDF of Dreams of Avarice, please report them here.


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  • #2
    page 7 "By speaking to use of eternal stillness,"

    should be: By speaking to us of eternal stillness, ?

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    • #3
      Is page 44 supposed to be blurred out like that?


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      • #4
        My page 44 is blurry too, so it isnt a problem in just one file.

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        • #5
          p. 64: "...but I can also it anew..."



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          • #6
            Page 41, the (8) annotation isn't the same size as the rest of the annotations in the book.

            Another voice for page 44 being weird.


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            • #7
              The footer for "Testimony of the Heretic - part II" misspells it "Hereti" , eg. on pages 31 and 33.


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              • #8
                Page 44 is intentional...

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                • #9
                  p. 13: "...and it Sekhem remembers it this way..."

                  p. 17: The line that should separate the sections on Am-Khaibit and An-Afkh is missing

                  p. 21: Sekhriu should be Sekhiru

                  p. 24: "The desert is empty by the will of my lover, Keb so that no being..." should be a comma after Keb

                  p. 29: "So in the aspect of Sutek my father cut me into many pieces..." should be a "they" after father?

                  p. 29: "...even though Judges of Duat created..." should be a "the" after though?

                  pp. 31, 33, 35, 37, footer: "Testimony of the Hereti"



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                  • #10
                    The bottom of p.49 contains an odd sentence fragment -- it looks kind of like Latin, but isn't. Is it supposed to be there?

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