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  • IanWatson
    started a topic Night Horrors: The Tormented errata

    Night Horrors: The Tormented errata

    Please list your errata for PTC's Night Horrors: The Tormented here.

    Please address only typos, layout glitches, misplaced elements, and similar errors. If it's merely a matter where you'd have phrased something differently, that's not errata, and should go in a different thread.

    Please confine comments to posting errata. Discussion should also go elsewhere.

    Thank you.

  • mistress of whispers
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    Thank you all! Going over then now & making changes as needed.

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  • Yossarian
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    p. 40: "Let it fester long enough and it’ll make you Wretched." -- I think this is meant to be "make you a Freak"? Wretched is the Frankenstein nickname, not Centimani.

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  • Yossarian
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    p. 21: "and even her bright blue eyes without their spark." -- there's a verb missing, I think
    p. 130: The font of the first paragraph ("The master of creating clones...") is purple
    p. 133: Dino should have the full Suffering Alembic from Contamination, not just the Pain Distillation
    p. 146: There's no line break between the paragraphs for Modified Distillation: Searing Corona and Modified Alembic: Blaze of Glory
    p. 146: Under The First Stone heading, "Pool", "Dice Pool", and "Action" should be in bold.
    p. 146: "The object explodes, inflicting bashing damage on those within a meter (except the Zeka)." -- the Distillation doesn't specify how much damage is dealt
    p. 146: "Dramatic Success: The object explodes into a conflagration..." -- should be Exceptional Success
    p. 148 and 150: The bullet lists in the Story Hooks sidebars aren't offset/aligned correctly.
    Last edited by Yossarian; 11-12-2018, 02:58 AM.

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  • Michael
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    p.89: Second to last paragraph seems to be missing an 'I'. Presently it reads "Should defend myself?".

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  • MythicFox
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    p. 69: The bottom-right portion of the image overlaps slightly with the text.

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  • Yossarian
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    p. 136: There's an extra wide line break in the middle of the Einstein quote.
    p. 136: "...landscapes infused with harsh glow of Cherenkov radiation..." -- missing a the
    p. 137: The Radiation Intensity table in the left hand column is in the same font as its header, making it difficult to read.
    p. 139: "If characters deal lethal damage to a Zeka using Transhuman Potential with Melee or Unarmed (or Firearms at point-blank range)," -- the word attacks should follow the parenthetical, I think
    Last edited by Yossarian; 11-10-2018, 01:54 AM.

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  • espritdecalmar
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    On page 145: "then responds in kind with an entirely new [. . .] subcategory entirely."

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  • FallenEco
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    Several of the Alchemists lack their Persistent Conditions; (which affects both how they are roleplayed and their mechanical interactions).

    All three Greater Qashmallim lack mechanical statistics. (Pages 112, 113 & 115)

    Both the Burning Coal (pg 109) and Pray for Rain (pg 110) Numen are not described.
    Last edited by FallenEco; 11-28-2018, 08:29 AM.

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  • Deinos
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    p 138 makes reference to Burning Tilt, but doesn't explain coverage.
    p 138 also lists Contaminated as a condition but is clearly a tilt.

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  • FallenEco
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    None of the characters in the Tormented 'chapter' have their Bestowment listed, except for the Hollow.
    Only one of the Zeka have a Bestowment.
    Last edited by FallenEco; 11-10-2018, 01:09 AM.

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  • Deinos
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    p 139 and 140 make reference to the Zeky's Intensity rating but never says what their rating is.

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  • Yossarian
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    p. 79: Mortimer's Speed should be 21, and Initiative should be 8

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  • Leliel
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    Julie Cheng has a dice pool of 6 for Role-related actions, but the rules seem to imply all Petrificati have a dice pool of 4. Please correct or put in advancement rules.

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  • Yossarian
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    My fault:

    p. 75: "xScience (Alchemy) 4" -- cut the x
    p. 75: The 1-5 rating for the Implant Dread Power is an artifact of an old draft I forgot to cut; it shouldn't have dots. Cut "+ Implant" from the Dice pool, and change Coeus's Dread Power stats so it doesn't have the (3) after Implant
    p. 75: The minus sign before Stamina is missing from the Dice Pool for Implant.
    p. 75: "or was correct it about its destiny" -- should be it correct
    p. 76: "Daisy’s condition — such is the nature of Flux." -- The sentence here got cut off. It should read: "Daisy’s condition probably isn’t as neat and tidy as that, and it may be that it changes as time goes on — such is the nature of Flux." If all that doesn't fit the page, the whole sentence fragment could just be cut and nothing would be lost.
    p. 79: "Its form is threefold, existing as a twisting, metal thing Prometheans recognize as a sublimatus: a facsimile of a home computer and the nanite spores it uses to infect its victims." -- the colon should be a comma, and there should be a comma after computer to make the list more obvious
    p. 83: "Spark considers them a nuisance, even worth murdering" -- there should be a not before the word even
    Last edited by Yossarian; 11-25-2018, 11:51 PM.

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