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  • #61
    Pg. 240 - 252 - Pandoran section - Wrong bookmarks structure

    Basically everything about Pandorans is pendent as subsection 'Birth', when it should be to the Pandorans bookmark.


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    • #62
      p. 11: The attribution for Mary Shelley is set off by a hyphen rather than an em-dash
      p. 99: There doesn't need to be a space before the em-dash before Dr. Herbert West
      p. 193: The title May is in Italics, but none of the other quote attributions do as such.



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      • #63
        • There's no entry for "Flux" in the glossary.
          • In fact, the book never defines what Flux is, although it's possible to gather from context early on that it's Bad Stuff Energy and eventually you can infer that it's Bad Pyros specifically, and on page 264 we're told that it's "entropy" to the "fusion" of Elpis. It really needs to be properly defined at the beginning of the book, though, because the concept comes up a lot.
          • (Other parts of the book talk about Flux as though it was a separate form of energy from Pyros ("Pyros and Flux"), this is probably a mistake?
        • The Refinements would read a lot more easily if they stated their high concept in a single sentence at the start of the writeup. Cuprum starts with:
          • "The world is a harsh, dangerous place, full of anger, distrust, and hate — and that’s just as far as humans are concerned. A Promethean, whose Azothic nature inexorably marks her as Other, can take no refuge with others and gain from their company. Rejected by all, confused, uncertain even of themselves, is it any wonder that many Prometheans turn first to Cuprum to better marshal their will and protect themselves from the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune? Others come to it later, turning to this most solitary of Refinements in the wake of tragedy. After all, if they seem doomed to hurt everyone, even those closest to them, perhaps it is better that they are close to no one. Thus, a Pariah is born."
          • This is confusing because we don't actually know what Cuprum is yet.
        • If it's at all possible, I think the book would read better if Chapters 1 and 2 were in the reverse order. The splats are difficult to make sense of without the context for all the concepts they reference.
        Last edited by Rand Brittain; 08-07-2016, 08:30 PM.


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        • #64
          p. 260: "More than a few alchemist who originally had no interest..." - needs to be plural



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          • #65
            p. 278: "Oregon Trail" should be in italics.
            p. 279: "Dark Athanor" should be "Jovian Athanor"?
            p. 280: Instances of "qashmal" and "qashmallim" should be in italics
            Last edited by Yossarian; 08-08-2016, 07:32 PM.



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            • #66
              Page 101 - Bestowment says they're on p.106 and links there, but they're on p.108. The previous page correctly links to p.108.


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              • #67
                Vulcanus doesn't have an references to how the Light-Bringers (followers of Phosphorum) view or use it. It also uses Ophidian or Serpent in several places where it should be Savant (might need to do a Ctrl+F for this one)
                Last edited by Daigotsu Max; 08-09-2016, 06:42 AM.

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                • #68
                  P.176 states Wastelands cause Health penalties, but those are nowhere to be found in the table.

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                  • #69
                    Page 116 - The Sleepless Merit is rated at one dot, but the text on p.103 and character sheet on page 104 say it's two dots.
                    Page 322 - Page XX strikes again.


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                    • #70
                      Originally posted by Teatime View Post
                      Page XX strikes again.
                      Ancient foe...



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                      • #71
                        I forgot to mention this because I wanted to look it up on more than just the Kindle, but the Galatea write up has some text hidden up there. Copypasting it, looks like it's the missing Extempore stereotype for Frankensteins.
                        Originally posted by page 23
                        • Extempore: Don’t give me that bullshit. There’s a way for all of us. Just keep on kicking.


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                        • #72
                          Originally posted by Aspel View Post
                          I forgot to mention this because I wanted to look it up on more than just the Kindle, but the Galatea write up has some text hidden up there. Copypasting it, looks like it's the missing Extempore stereotype for Frankensteins.
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                          Seems to have been fixed when the page 70 issues got corrected.



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                          • #73
                            p. 174: "A careful Promethean can stay in one area, if she's careful."
                            p. 176: "At the amount of time listed below..." — the chart is above
                            p. 176: "...the following five categories track the potency." — the chart with the categories is above
                            p. 176: The sidebar about non-Promethean players and Disquiet is in the Wasteland section
                            Last edited by Yossarian; 08-10-2016, 04:35 AM.



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                            • #74
                              Page 123 "Able Worker" and page 124-125 "Bulwark" have the same text

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                              • #75
                                p. 114: Famous Face merit should have Prerequisite: Promethean.

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