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  • Finn523
    replied to Halfway [Quest]
    You made me spit my drink. Well done....
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  • Finn523
    replied to Halfway [Quest]
    Time flew by as you recovered from your adventures. Your days were spent running the shop, dedicating your time to finishing out your remaining projects, and recovering your legs. Your ankles gained strength everyday, and you soon found walking on them to be fine. With nothing holding you back, you quickly whipped through outstanding orders. The perfume was going to be a big seller in about 3 months when the hot season started. Your spill proof cup sold the very day it was finished. You sent Tocho’s ring via carrier, and he showed up at your shop later. He gave you fine bottle of “medicinal...
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  • Finn523
    replied to Back Alive or Maybe Dead [Quest]
    Something else:
    Judgment and Absolution....
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  • Finn523
    replied to Halfway [Quest]
    Totally fair. I thought I was being funny. I'll just change it....
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  • Finn523
    replied to Back Alive or Maybe Dead [Quest]
    Let's stick with whomever Ash thinks is going to be in the most trouble if trouble arrives. That might be Seres.
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  • Finn523
    replied to Halfway [Quest]
    You limped over to the construct and pulled the chisel from it’s back. Straddling it’s chest, you drove the chisel into its sternum over and over. The metal that made up it’s exterior was luckily not thick. Passerbys murmured as you worked. From their perspective, you were basically skinning a man in the streets. The construct looked human if you weren’t close enough to see it’s head. You were upset, so you worked through disapproving glares.

    After a few minutes, you worked the core free from the body. It was a sphere about the size of childs ball and smooth as liquid. It had a crack...
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    Last edited by Finn523; 04-13-2017, 12:51 PM.

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  • Finn523
    replied to Back Alive or Maybe Dead [Quest]
    Gaze. Her being nervous is a bad sign. Seres probably just wants to talk about Ash about stopping her.
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  • Finn523
    replied to Halfway [Quest]
    You scrambled around your shop. You grabbed some canvas and tied it to your ankles, pulling it tight enough to hurt. You thought about trying to stuff some of the canvas into Cassandra’s side, but decided against it. Medicine just wasn’t your thing.

    You hoisted Cassandra to her feet. “Come on, up you come.” You couldn’t carry her, but she seemed able to walk. She tottered about and needed you to guide her. She mumbled something incoherent and you pushed into the street. Your ankles groaned from the effort.

    Moving Cassandra was hard. Her legs were weak and shaky. Every...
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  • Finn523
    replied to Halfway [Quest]
    Close as well. 4 blocks....
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  • Finn523
    replied to Back Alive or Maybe Dead [Quest]
    If the ranger thinks the portal is two ways:

    Victory is at hand. After them!

    If the ranger thinks that portal is a one way trip:

    Stop her.
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  • Finn523
    replied to Halfway [Quest]
    As you stared at blue light coming from Sword’s hand, she set your leg. You didn’t even feel it. Even your head felt better. “What exactly are you doing?”

    Sword popped her lips. “Magic.”

    You rolled your eyes. “Come on. That isn’t sorcery. You aren’t a spirit. That makes you an air Dragon?”

    Sword looked you in the eyes. “I'm an anathema. Chosen of the sun. I'm in town visiting my sister. I’m leaving town as soon as I’m done with you.” Sword’s eyes bore into yours. You could feel her searching for what you’d do with that information.

    “That is....something.”...
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    Last edited by Finn523; 03-31-2017, 09:26 PM.

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  • I enjoyed listening to the podcast.

    The transition at the end from Kalara, ex slave/guildee to Koh the Bandit was pretty quick. I would like to see more time given to that transition. The story doesn't need to go further in the timeline, but some space dedicated to character switch would be nice.
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  • I'm really digging this.

    Where is the powerful keyword defined? Did I miss it somewhere?
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  • Finn523
    replied to Crafting for an army
    I read the title as "crafting an army" and was sorely disappointed.

    I would treat it as a major project for the exp required and generated, but the actual mechanics should be a superior project. I don't like the idea of a bunch of something making it cost a different type....
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  • Finn523
    replied to Halfway [Quest]
    I meant to include this picture in the last post: http://d2fbmjy3x0sdua.cloudfront.net...46-161_l_1.jpg
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  • Finn523
    replied to Halfway [Quest]
    Slowly reaching up, taking care to avoid touching your head, you took off your necklace. “Madam, I can pray to the crone, but I can’t get a doctor. I need you to get one for me. I can pay whoever you get.” The lady looked torn for a moment, nodded and left.

    Gods and spirits. They infest the land. People have to grovel to them to get help. As a business owner yourself, you’d never make anyone prostrate themselves for your services. Why were gods so different? In a way, the Immaculate philosophy made sense to you. The gods shouldn’t be worshiped. Mortals and gods should exchange...
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  • Finn523
    replied to Back Alive or Maybe Dead [Quest]
    Bayonet Lunge. Hell or glory!
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