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  • Thank you! I have a fellow writer helping refine grammar/technique, but haven't actually implemented their suggestions yet, which makes me glad to know my draft is pretty clean! Woohoo, my BA in English wasn't a total waste! XD

    I will most definitely be updating this thread with new chapters when they're done, which should be coming soon once I have a chance to survive convention season and study up on Chiaroscuro. Thanks so much for taking the time out to leave me feedback! It's been so helpful and I'm happy to hear enjoyable at the same time. ...
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  • The Uncrucified (Beta Draft) continues with Chapter 8 - The Cost of Dreams!

    This chapter marks the end of this story's time in Gem and all the new material I've added since the Alpha draft. We're on our way to Chiaroscuro now, which means I'll be taking a short break to compile a new Visual Guide for the city, which is always a lot of fun! (If you missed my Visual Guide for Gem, check it out here.)

    I'd love to know if readers enjoyed this story's time in Gem? How can I improve that lackluster beginning? I feel like those two starting chapters are the weakest, but I'm
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  • Thank you. That's a valuable bit of info! It's been a challenge to approach things not only from a mortal perspective, but also the perspective of someone who was chosen not necessarily because they are a great warrior, but are more talented in a subtle skillset. I'm hoping I can lay the bricks for someone whose greatest strength will be in societal upheaval, this being the reason she was chosen as an Eclipse.

    I feel like these first few chapters actually drag a bit, so I'd be curious how you feel about the rest once you get a chance to get past this initial setting. I think I...
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  • Also Tikor you gave me plenty to correct, but I'd be curious what parts you found to be fun, as you mentioned? I'd be keen to hear your thoughts on what I'm doing well and not just what corrections I need to make. That can be just as valuable for me, as well. And again, thanks so much for taking the time out to leave feedback!

    As as a future note to others who might be interested in becoming Beta Readers, I've expanded on the kind of feedback I'm looking for in my opening post. Please do take a look at How to Use This Blog before leaving feedback, as it'll help you understand what...
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    Last edited by angelicshadow; 08-05-2019, 11:42 PM.

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  • Hey there! I had been wondering who was leaving comments with the mysterious alias. Thank you SO VERY much! I appreciate you taking the time out to give the first few chapters a detailed look and I'm happy to hear it entertained at its best.

    I'm pretty swamped with DragonCon prep this entire month, but I'm looking forward to going through any feedback that folks leave when I can and absorbing it all to make this story the best it can be. Thanks again!...
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  • Dang good playlist! I'm tickled Scars made it on there. Love that one! I'd enjoy making some art with a playlist printed on it sometime for my own story. Seems like a fun thing to design!...
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  • Rewriting "The Uncrucified" An Eclipse Caste's Tale [Feedback Needed][Fiction]

    Greetings, fellow Exalts! Some of you might remember me as the writer and artist behind The Uncrucified, the memoir of Kalara Vadras, an Eclipse Caste's who rose to greatness from humble beginnings as a slave in The South.




    Since finishing this story, however, I've gotten the overambitious urge to rewrite it ENTIRELY! I've been encouraged to consider submitting Kalara's tale to the Storyteller's Vault and if I'm going to do that, I really want to make sure it is as polished as it can be. I also want to expand this tale to include more delicious world-building...
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    Last edited by angelicshadow; 08-05-2019, 11:43 PM.

  • Thanks so much for your replies, everyone! I am taking notes of everything. Please do keep it coming!
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  • [Feedback Needed!] What do you want to see in the Exalted Storyteller's Vault?

    Hey to my forum peeps! I'm an artist/writer doing research as I intend to create material for the STV at some point in my future (as well as asking on behalf of other creators hoping to do the same).

    What do YOU want to see in the Exalted STV? Art packs? Custom martial arts? Evocations?

    The sky's the limit! Let me know what you want to see and be as specific as you like!
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  • So happy to see you complete this! Congratulations! It's been an exciting ride so far and I can't wait to finish reading it. Highly recommended to anyone here pondering diving in! DO EET!

    This story balances a good amount of drama with really intriguing Righteous Devil imagery and a unique take on The South that's always refreshing to see. I definitely want to see more adventures of this Righteous Devil cowboy!
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