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  • Reaper Verse
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    Dang it. I knew that was going to happen at least once. I'm using the Brotherhood's layout as a foundation so every now and then something slips. Will work on fixing that.


    And thanks everyone for reporting whatever is off. I figured that having it in a PDF form would make it easier on the eyes but every mistake noted is very appreciated....
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  • Reaper Verse
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    Awesome. In the mean time, I got the Compacts proto-PDF all ready. 80 flipping pages worth of content. Organizations without a Splash Page have a dummy placeholder which I am totally going to use as the official Splash Art for one of these groups.




    Anyways, here's a link to the Compacts
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  • Reaper Verse
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    I think that having the documents in PDF form might help the proofing process so what I'm probably going to do soon is create proto-PDFs of the organizations to give everyone something more tangible and visually appealing. We have the intro text for both the Compacts and Conspiracies so those can get protos soon. The Cults, Cabals, and Conventions are going to need an intro but I can transfer a good chunk from the original document into that Chapter. Chapter 4 is the chapter where basically everything can be chunked out and completed by section.

    Looks like each Chapter is gonna be...
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  • Reaper Verse
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    Huh. You're right. I hadn't even noticed that. Will change in the next iteration. The main thing is that Splinters and Splits were taken from the old forums and I believe most of the text is accurate to its first draft so presumably Splits were referred to as Lunatics before the change....
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  • Reaper Verse
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    Alright. I formatted the Undertakings and the pages take up 42 pages in the book. Pretty solid amount. Insofar, I have gotten about 102 pages in the entire document but this is the first section that is effectively complete.




    This is the link to the PDF of the Undertakings, including a page introducing the section.




    So now what? Right now, I want to finish writing up the Talents to completely round out the Slasher section before moving back to the Compacts and creating splash arts for those. The Slasher section itself is probably 1/3 of...
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  • Reaper Verse
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    Ding dong. Art and text delivery!

    First up is the Stranger and Transcendent. Happy with how unsettling I find the Stranger but not too content with the Transcendent. Need to make it more...extra.




    EDIT: And here's the Minder and Collector. The Masters are getting the cut.




    END EDIT


    Some text for the Slashers. For Mutants, their hideousness works in favor for them; people just can't look away from how freakish they are. This gives the Mutants an advantage as their victims are too busy watching the...
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  • Reaper Verse
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    I compare them to Tomie a lot because of her MO. Tomie uses her beauty, and in one story her position as the school's Morality Club leader, to get her way by conscripting other students and sometimes adults into doing her will for her. The main thing is that Harpies, in their write-up, are paranoid about being in situations where their authority is challenged whereas Alphas are essentially the core to a living social structure and don't have to worry.

    Actually, now I kinda feel like an Alpha could have something like conditional immortality. Alphas have integrated themselves into...
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  • Reaper Verse
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    Alrighty. I'll get to revising her then.

    Still trying to work around the Harpy/Alpha unique and I began thinking about Anthony Fremont from It's a Good Life. Because he has reality-warping abilities, particularly the ability to banish people into the "cornfield", he has effectively held an entire town captive to his whims and doesn't really give half a damn if his whims destroy the town, considering that he summons snowfall during crop season. Maybe the Alpha's ability is just their sheer audacity, being able to get away with terrible crimes out in the open with no one under...
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  • Reaper Verse
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    That could work. So what would be happening is 1) Your Darling has in some way captured/imprisoned her beloved, 2) uses her broadcasts as a way to express her love, and 3) kills anyone who tries to snoop under the assumption that the snoopers are trying to tear her and her beloved apart?...
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  • Reaper Verse
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    No problem. Your Darling was mainly me writing myself into a corner; considering that her schtick would have been "I dedicate my broadcast to this person who just suffered a recent loss that I may or may not have contributed to", I created a plot hole where it would be kinda obvious that she would eventually be caught if she just kept dedicating her broadcast to that one person. Was gonna hand-wave it with a "Wandering Eye" Talent but I'm gonna try to stick to the core of what Wardens are.

    Trying to think of a way to exemplify the Warden's sort of love-turtling....
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  • Reaper Verse
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    Text-based update.


    Tried my hand at working some Talents. These two are basically entry-level. Divergent Evolution gives a mechanical basis for creating dual-class Rippers at the expense of being unable to become a Scourge. Monstrous is basically the Legend's Dread and Mutant's Mutation but generic. Working on replacements for those.


    Ripper Only Talent - Divergent Evolution
    As nice as it is to think that Slashers have a set pattern to their killings, it’s almost never the case. An Avenger learns deception to lead their mark into a false sense of
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  • Reaper Verse
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    Art and text inbound. First is the Predator/Beast.





    And here's the write-up for the Sentinel and Warden.
    VASCU Case Study: “Andrew Miller”
    From the files of VASCU Agent Kyle Wells

    “The Westwood serial murders were originally attributed to one James Howell, a college student who lived in the same dormitory as one Andrew Miller, the true culprit. Miller and Howell, despite having different majors, shared numerous core classes and often attended the same social gatherings, though not together. During Howell’s time at Westwood, Miller
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  • Reaper Verse
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    Can't think of anything I would need at the moment. Surprised myself by going Chameleon/Boogeyman first instead of Predator/Beast though. The Case Studies are being written by the seat of my pants and removing references sin't going to be too bad.
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  • Reaper Verse
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    Chameleon and Boogeyman coming in. Gonna just post the raw images this time





    Currently writing up Case Studies for the Sentinel/Warden. Also will do a quick scan off all the organizations to delete references to removed or missing organizations in the Stereotypes....
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