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  • Yossarian
    replied to 2e Game Lines
    To elaborate slightly, Demon was written before it was decided that the "[Blank] Chronicle" books would become proper second editions and before the series' Chronicles of Darkness rebranding, so it's the odd one out in terms of structure, but not content. As mentioned, it's fully compatible with all the other Second Edition material, it just doesn't contain a Storytelling System rules chapter; it does contain most of the God-Machine Chronicle rules-update / patch, though in practice (now) that mostly means all the Merits are available in one place without having to check the Chronicles...
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  • It's a essentially a sticker you paste into the interior of a book, often with a place to note the name of the book's owner, though in this case it's with the authors' signatures....
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  • p. 453: "You are brave to return after what you unleashed on A.G. If these photographs interest you, click on the chat.exe program." -- it's a little unclear this is from the USB. Maybe add quotation marks or the like?
    p. 454: "LM1972: Still there??" -- should have blue highlight
    p. 454: "LM1972 closed chat" LM1972 should be bold
    p. 458: "Isabel is not Anastaz’s type..." -- should be Anastasz...
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  • p. 416, sidebar heading: "Long intervals of horrible sanity" -- should be caps: "Long Intervals of Horrible Sanity"
    p. 422: "...a series of red velvet ropes leading, presumably, to theater itself." -- should be the theater
    p. 427: "I can’t say that I’m love with the idea..." -- should be in love
    p. 430: "I thought were you taking the piss..." -- should be you were
    p. 431: "Cainites Never Come In From The Cold" -- should be lowercase...
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  • p. 369: "He’s a con-artist, or as my sire would say; “a charlatan and manipulator.”" -- semicolon should be a comma
    p. 406: "princess123 joined the conversation" -- italicized text (my emphasis) shouldn't be bold
    p. 406: "mrmysterio joined the conversation" -- mrmysterio should be bold
    p. 406: "princess123: fucking harsh" -- the highlight of the chat entry is missing; should be blue like the other princess123 entries.
    p. 407: "Historical reports of mass hysteria in Jerusalem are included in today’s magazine, -- should be a period?...
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  • p. 313: "...holding fast against such stock such as your own sire, I presume." -- cut the second such...
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  • p. 249: "Stoker’s Dracula." -- should be in italics
    p. 249: "They’d helped keep avert a full-blown Gehenna..." -- cut keep
    p. 249: "...its face from even from my vision..." -- cut the second from
    p. 265: "...the resident for his compiled Encyclopedia Vampirica." -- should be italics (and the AE spelling of encyclopaedia if that's desired)
    p. 265: "Ultimately, they would all be commanded to bring death to the vampire that’s done it the most harm: Vlad Tepes?" -- Doesn't seem to be a question
    p. 279: "...making...
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  • p. 246: "...the might be called 'Anarchs.'" -- they
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  • p. 221: "Beckett: It does if the why goes against your true nature." -- This line is out of alignment
    p. 233, sidebar: "Libertatia in other Nights" -- should be capitalized
    p. 242: "their “communion” three times..." -- doesn't need the tab at the start of the paragraph, as it's meant to be a continuation of text we don't see
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  • p. 161: "Taken From The Front Page" -- should be from the
    p. 214: "Even as Hesha breaks with the orthodox arm of his Clan to forge his own path, its strength begins to coils beneath it." -- should be coil?...
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  • Yossarian
    replied to To Kill a Demon
    Make a deal with another demon...
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  • p. 183: "RE: My email" -- the bold bleeds onto the subject line
    p. 186: "By Clément Duval" -- the accented-E is in a smaller font size (I don't think it's intentional?)
    p. 190: "...Jean-François’ retainers..." -- Should have an S after the apostrophe. The rules for that are always an absolute pain, but I think because the S in Francois is silent, you want a "full" plural.
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  • p. 181: "Engaging The Vessel of Transference" -- The should be lowercase
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  • p. 160: "Washington D.C." -- needs a comma before D.C.
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  • Quickest turnover we've had in a while:

    Chapter 6, part 2

    (In a frustrating turn of events, my phone failed to record the session, which means I don't have an audio version of this one for posterity. On the plus side, especially for you all, it meant I had to write up the summary much, much faster than usual, before I forgot everything. My loss is your gain! Not as much dialogue as usual, but my co-ST and I managed to remember some good bits.)
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  • p. 144: Rules contradiction --
    "The Dhampir ... can drink vitae to replenish more quickly, with all the usual effects (i.e. becoming blood bound or a ghoul)."
    But, further down:
    "[A Dhampir] can be blood bound to a vampire, though she does not become a ghoul."
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  • p. 108: "...no Assamite can be trusted now the Curse is broken..." missing a that...
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  • p. 61: "The one beneath Union Station is said to hold a copy of the Encyclopedia Vampirica." -- Just checked my copy, and it should be Encyclopaedia (Yes, I am a horrible nerd; I apologize for nothing. )

    p. 63: "Am Unpleasant history? He left you staked and tied up..." -- should be An unpleasant

    p. 75: "Old Times There are not Forgotten" -- should be Are Not
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  • p. 23: "the Book of the Grave-War and the Eye of Hazimel." -- wrong font: the italics change Beckett's handwritten font into the default typeface.
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  • It's a more common phrasing in British English (or at least formal English); it means "distinct"....
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