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  • Hey, it's YOUR world. You play it like you want.

    I can give you examples of characters with 'zero Appearance' in 'canon' that are anything but ugly, but I don't suppose you'd like to see that. Alternatively, I never said that playing a Disney version of a character was wrong, and if that's how you saw it, I'm sorry, mate. It's not MY cup o' tea, but more power to you if that's where YOUR game leads you.

    ...Not to feed a troll, but I think it's worth pointing out that saying a flat-out 'no' and calling someone else's ideas 'bulls**t' maybe hurts our hobby more than what...
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    Last edited by Phaolan; 03-20-2017, 07:16 PM.

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  • The appearance thing IS worth comment, but know that 'inhuman' and 'ugly' are not the seam thing. Back in the nights of the Omen War between the Tremere and the Tzimisce, there were all kinds of Gargoyles and other servants created in the labs of Ceoris, but even Virstania's most lovely creations were still inhuman in appearance, no matter how perfect their horns and wings and freakish proportions were. As mentioned above, Appearance 0 need not mean ugliness so much as 'not right' in a viewer's eyes. Think along the lines of the uncanny valley (e.g. 'human shaped' robots, what it is that makes...
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  • p 79, second para of second column, ‘our antitribu show’ should be italic ‘antitribu
    p 80, first para of first column, ‘things happened: an car’ should be ‘a car’
    p 80, first para of first column, ‘and the prince’ should be capital ‘Prince’
    p 80, third para of second column, ‘powers of the antitribu’ should be italic ‘antitribu
    p 80, third para of second column, ‘The antitribu might have’ should be italic ‘antitribu
    p 81, third para of first column, ‘(V20, p. 469)’ should be bold V20
    p 81, second para of second column (below the sidebar), ‘taxes her duties...
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  • p 55, last para of second column through p 56 first para of first column, italics should end AFTER ‘other’ (but continues until the emdash)
    p 56, fifth para of first column, ‘of bloodlines and antitribu’ should be italic ‘antitribu
    p 57, last full para of first column, ‘Ravnos and their antitribu’ should be italic ‘antitribu
    p 58, third para of first column, ‘debauched Toreador antitribu’ should be italic ‘antitribu
    p 60, in sidebar ‘The Necromancy Lie’ text, ‘(V20, p. 492)’ should be bold V20
    p 60, third para of second column, ‘(V20, p. 73)’ should be bold V2...
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  • p 27, sixth para of first column, ‘Mosh Pit (Melpominee [5 dots])’ should be changed to ‘(Melpominee [6 dots]) if the above changes are made…
    p 27, last para of first column, ‘picks a derangement’ should be capital ‘Derangement’
    p 27, first para of second column, ‘effects of the derangement’ should be capital ‘Derangement’
    p 27, first para of second column, ‘the derangement does not’ should be capital ‘Derangement’
    p 27, second para of second column, ‘drawn towards’ should be ‘toward’
    p 27, last para of second column, ‘still...
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  • Below and following are my errata, which I put together after reviewing the revised Onyx Path style guide (REVISED you guys! Whoop whoop!)...

    p 3, top of first column, shouldn’t the heading ‘The Find 9’ be left justified and bold to match the framing fiction headings of the rest of the chapters?
    p 3, top of middle column, ‘Combo Disciplines 16’ should be ‘Combination Disciplines’ to match V20 Lore of the Clans
    p 3, middle column, ‘Alternate Daimoinon Disciplines 17’ should be ‘Alternate Daimoinon Powers’ as we use the term ‘power’ rather than ‘Discipline’...
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Phaolan
Phaolan
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Last Activity: 03-20-2017, 07:31 PM
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