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  • Anaximander
    replied to Ask the Devs
    So much new lore goodness in Arms! Question: from the name alone, one would think the "devil-stars" were Malfean, but they have "lairs in the firmament," so are they of non-Malfean origin?
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  • Anaximander
    replied to The Necromancy Homebrew Thread
    I just wanted to say, Ekorren, that I read this the other day, and I loved it! You did a really good job....
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  • Anaximander
    replied to Arms of the Chosen
    In in loregasms! Niobraran War! Zen-Mu! Interloping devil stars! My beloved Scorpion Empire! Evocative (heh) timeline names! So much goodness.

    I particularly liked the fiction in this book. There's not one I didn't like.

    Great art! The art for Crusading Spear of the Depths in particular ravishes me.

    Good job, all artists, writers, and developers! I'm even more excited for Dragon-Blooded and The Realm!
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  • Anaximander
    replied to Arms of the Chosen errata thread
    pg. 11: "since reality's dawn, and shape them still" Delete comma.

    pg. 12: "for enchantment, and a set of distinctive" Delete comma.

    pg. 15: "roleplaying opportunity, and an explanation" Delete comma
    "for Halta, and hate the Linowan" Delete comma.

    pg. 18: "skill, rather than" Delete comma.

    pg. 28: "modern age, until found by a Guild tomb raider" Delete comma.

    pg. 37: "struck more than once, The shield" Change comma to period.

    pg....
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  • Anaximander
    replied to Ask the Devs
    Are there any former Lunar Dominions that have "thrown off the yoke" as it were of the Lunars?
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  • pg. 481: "point-of-view, and exacerbate" Delete comma.
    "its thirst, and evolves" Delete comma.
    pg. 482: "vampire mature, would be to" Delete comma.
    Several instances throughout this chapter: "Id" is capitalized when neither ego or superego are, and "id" itself is not capitalized in some places either.
    "this may yield to an" Change "yield" to "lead."
    "positives for the fledgling" Insert comma between "positives" and "for."
    "insatiable, even arrogant in their"
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  • pg. 434: "our belts or mentors... gone by may" Insert comma between "belts" and "or." Insert comma between "by" and "may."

    pg. 436: "the engines, and approached" Delete comma.
    "On good authority I'm told" Insert comma between "authority" and "I'm."
    pg. 437: The annotation is unsigned.
    "forced a bond to form" Change "forced" to "forcing."
    "Make yourself to home." Change "to" to "at."
    pg. 438: "minutes, before being...
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  • pg. 421: "Wolf credit, keeping the" Change comma to semi-colon.
    "social scene and if" Insert comma between "scene" and "and."
    pg. 422: "smell it, in the folds" Delete comma.
    "on me and she smiles" Insert comma between "me" and "and."
    pg. 423: "Other were just no longer" Change "Other" to "Others."

    pg. 424: "years ago, into the burial" Delete comma.

    pg. 427: "me once, maybe he" Change comma to semi-colon.
    "she's right, I don't
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  • pg. 402: "old dig, re-opened and worked" Delete comma.

    pg. 403: "the pit I sense" Insert comma between "pit" and "I."
    "air pressure, or some" Delete comma.
    pg. 404: "Ben Gurion and I'd" Insert comma between "Gurion" and "and."
    "brethren however, and what" Insert comma between "brethren" and "however."
    pg. 405: "my head and I can't" Insert comma between "head" and "and."

    pg. 407: "today's magazine," Change comma...
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  • pg. 381: "objects d'art, and their" Delete comma.
    "official capacity he didn't" Insert comma between "capacity" and "he."
    pg. 382: "with me he had dropped" Insert comma between "me" and "he."
    "recording devices, or the presence" Delete comma.
    Should "final death" be "Final Death"? As it is in an "in-character" piece, do Kindred capitalize it among themselves? Or is it an out-of-character game term?
    "long way and I've dangled at you." Insert comma between "way"
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  • pg. 363: "25th floor, made from" Delete comma.
    "surrounding the pool, and" Delete comma.
    "instead of limbs, and a" Delete comma.
    pg. 364: "his shrieks, and raced" Delete comma.
    "I arrived, and attempting to" Delete comma.
    "further down one does" Change "does" to "goes."
    pg. 365: "overflow drains, and threw" Delete comma.
    Bold, center, and cap "[Recording ends]."
    "of influence, and now" Delete comma.
    pg. 367: "for years, and needed" Delete ...
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  • pg. 344: "these revelations for, like the Capuchin" Insert comma between "revelations" and "for."
    "the end, and has been" Delete comma.

    pg. 345: "drive so far, before having" Delete comma.

    pg. 346: "An hour's past and the banging's stopped." Insert comma between "past" and "and."

    pg. 347: "the library, and has extensively" Delete comma.
    "by Clan, and makes frequent" Delete comma.
    pg. 348: "Julian Ganders; fell to his Beast" Change semi-colon...
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  • pg. 329: "few boons, and was rewarded" Delete comma.
    "the Archon and, very shortly" Insert comma between "Archon" and "and."
    pg. 330: Bold, center, and cap "[Recording ends]."

    pg. 331: Bold, center, and cap "[Recording begins]."
    "and word though, on when" Insert comma between "word" and "though."
    pg. 332: "I apologize, Mr. Beckett, I must run an errand." Change comma between "Becket" and "I" to semi-colon.
    "*1167 #1194" Insert comma between dates.
    "Aimeric
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  • pg. 308: "My apologies, I meant" Change comma to period.

    pg. 311: Bold "Subject:" in the email.
    "Camarilla control, and made" Delete comma.
    pg. 312: "car bomb explosions and gunfire was" Insert comma between "explosions" and "and."

    pg. 313: "canis lupus lupus" should be "Canis lupus lupus."

    pg. 317: "emanated from his location" Change "his" to "this."

    pg. 320: Bold, center, and cap "[There is a lengthy pause in the recording]"...
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  • pg. 286: "of yours though, trust me." Insert comma between "yours" and "though."

    pg. 287: Should "toe tagged" be "toe-tagged"?

    pg. 288: "[Power tools in use again followed by another wet thud]" Change stage direction to bold, all caps, centered. Insert comma between "again" and "followed."
    "Through Torquemada I found" Insert comma between "Torquemada" and "I."
    "I've even got it right" Change to "got" to "gotten."
    pg. 289:...
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  • pg. 269: The Anatole annotation is unsigned.
    "before, and nothing seen" Delete comma.
    "Russia, and got nothing" Delete comma.

    pg. 271: "Greece, and agreed that" Delete comma.
    "and naturally it involves" Insert comma between "naturally" and "it."

    pg. 272: "the city and he had limited" Insert comma between "city" and "and."
    "rest of Russia and b) Baba yaga" Insert comma between "Russia" and "and."

    pg. 275: "with...
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  • pg. 248: "nearby village, and assist you" Delete comma.

    pg. 249: "That evening I made" Insert comma between "evening" and "I."
    "of note, and not reason" Delete comma.
    "They'd helped keep avert a full-blown" Delete "keep."
    pg. 250: "Suddenly several tons" Insert comma between "Suddenly" and "several."

    pg. 251: "Though well maintained," Delete extra space between "well" and "maintained."
    "Earlier this evening I found myself"
    ...
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  • pg. 220: "I was there and now I ain't." Insert comma between "there" and "and."
    "up good though, and I ain't" Insert comma between "good" and "though."
    pg. 221: "Mama Lion and you're here" Insert comma between "Lion" and "and."

    pg. 222: "Apparently she is a Lasombra antitribu of respectable age, and has spent" Insert comma between "Apparently" and "she."
    "this Libertatia, or Libertatia in general?" Delete comma.
    pg. 223: "swift communication...
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  • pg. 202: "into my hands and, for lack" Insert comma between "hands" and "and."

    pg. 203: "associate of Hesha who, with a little" Insert comma between Hesha and "who."

    pg. 204: "I should know, I as there." Change comma to semi-colon.

    pg. 205: "next a tea shop" Add "to" between "next" and "a."

    pg. 208: "internet connection, and work out" Delete comma.

    pg. 211: "in the air, I'll be coming to her." Change comma to semi-colon...
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  • pg. 184: "them both, and call Cesare" Delete comma.

    pg. 187: "Apparently he blames" Insert comma between "Apparently and "he."

    pg. 189: "This is a diary account, and not" Delete "and."
    "Serpent of the Light, it would seem." Delete comma.
    pg. 190: "actions of Methusalehs, and veracity" Delete comma.

    pg. 192: "The river forks and the flow's" Insert comma between "forks" and "and."

    pg. 195: "By the time you read this I'll have"...
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