It seems like an inevitability that, whenever a writer ends up working on a story about a character they came up with for Exalted, the circumstances of that Exaltation are the first choice to reach for.
For my part, I noticed that I had four Solar characters that I'd be putting together once I had the new corebook - almost an entire circle - so I figured I'd create another and make it a full set.
...and then I started wondering why I should wait...
"In one dimension I find existence, in two I find life, but in three, I find freedom."
-- Foreman Domai, Cadet Induction Ceremony, Mission Year 2216
She’d always had sharp eyes, the sharpest anyone in the village had ever seen. She could pick out a goat on the slope of the mountain across the valley, or identify which fox was taking which route towards the cavy pens, or count the petals of a blossom from across the high meadow.
She loved to look up and watch the birds - the hummingbirds flitting between flowers, the flycatchers darting after their pray, the slow graceful circles and arcs of the eagles and lammergeiers soaring on the mountain updrafts.
Dreaming of how it would feel to fly, free of the chains of the stony slopes.
Her mother, of course, beat her whenever she caught her looking up and out with that look in her eyes; people who thought like that tended to walk out along the edge of the Razor Rock and try, and none of them had ever walked away. Certainly her cousin hadn’t.
She couldn’t blame her mother for being scared, and she knew very well that, dream as she might, she couldn’t fly…
But she still dreamed.
Now, secure in the knowledge that it was the wrong time of day for wolves and the wrong time of year for eagles, she lay back on the huge, sun-warmed boulder at the top of the highest meadow with her poncho spread on top of her for warmth and her arms crossed beneath her head while the alpaca grazed and she stared up into the blue infinity of the summer sky.
The flaw was there, a linked scatter of dark dots, blurred even to her eyes by distance, high above the highest cirrus clouds.
“Sisa!” a treble voice called, setting the livestock to bleating. “Elder sister!”
She sat up and looked over at the notch where the path up the cliffside came out into the meadow as her little brother scrambled into view. “Capac?” she asked. “What’s happened?”
“Exalts!” he gasped, and hauled himself upright to wave his hands so excitedly his poncho fluttered around his body even in the still between gusts. “Five of them, and lots of bearers and they’re at the village and they want to talk to everybody so the headman says to bring the stock in and hurry!”
She felt her own eyes go wide, and she had to shake her head sharply to clear the startlement from it enough to whistle the three sharp tones. The herd stopped where it grazed, furry heads coming up from their grass and swiveling to look at her with ears erect and alert, and when she repeated the whistle most of them began to drift together, clustering under the rock into a fluffy, irritated mass of wool.
A few animals, highly placed in the herd heirarchy or just hungrier than their siblings, stubbornly kept grazing, and she slipped the poncho back on properly over her dress and hopped off of the boulder. “Help me get them gathered up,” she ordered her brother, and between the two of them only a little chasing was needed to guide the reluctant alpacas back into the herd.
The boy started down the path first, leaving the animals to follow single-file down the narrow, twisting ledge and her to bring up the rear, descending the thousand yards or so to the hollow that sheltered the village, overlooking the tumbling white waters of the river and the crops terraced along the valley floor, the late spring flowers and shoots bright against the dark stones and earth.
When they got to the village, and had shuffled the herd into the enclosure - hemmed in by dry-stone walls - set aside for it, their fellow villagers had all gathered around the common square, which was full of porters and packbeasts and, despite what Capac had promised, only three Exalts, all dressed in jade armor of one design or another over clothes of finely ornamented silk, already stained and battered by the dust of their climb up from the foothills.
The leader had hair of shining gold and brilliant scarlet eyes, and he lay back in a sling chair with casual ease, his legs stretched out under the table that groaned - figuratively, it was stone - with the best feast the village could put out on such short notice. The Headman perched uncomfortably on another chair - Sisa knew he had to have been ordered into the seat, or that would have been an unforgivable insult - and was talking to him at length. From the gestures, describing one pass or another, so the Dragonbloods would be moving on.
The other two were both women, one so massive that she’d settled cross-legged on the stony ground to put the table at the right height. Her cloud-white hair was cut to hang only to her jaw, her shoulders, under the jade plate that shrouded them along with the rest of her figure, were as broad as any field laborer’s, and her stunningly lovely face was set in an expression whose utterly disinterested blankness could only be both habitual and deliberate. She ate without so much as a glance at the conversation happening only a few feet from her.
The last of the three seemed to fade into the background next to the vibrancy and sheer presence of her companions, a pretty, quiet woman with long green hair and pupil-less green eyes who would obviously rather have been elsewhere, even as she politely thanked Hipa for bringing her a mug.
Corralling Capac from running to gawk by means of a firm hand hanging onto his collar, she threaded through the crowd to slide in between her brother and his wife and their mother. “Why are they here?” she asked, since the noble visitors were obviously genuine Exalted.
“They’re-” her mother started to say, before one of the Headman’s sons ran up.
“Mother Hapac, where- Sisa! Come on, the Exaltations want you!”
“Me?!” she blurted, too shocked to be more coherent. But he gestured furiously, so she went, running with her poncho flying and her sandals slapping the ground.
“Ah!” the headman said as she pounded up. “Here she is. Great Lord, this is Hapac Sisa. Her mother is one of our finest weavers, but she herself has the sharpest eyes our village has seen in living memory. If you wish keen mortal eyes to supplement your own holy ones, you wish for Sisa.”
The leader hummed meditatively, scarlet eyes seeming to glitter like sunlight scattering off of dark water in the brightness of the daylight as he studied her for several long, terrifying moments before he smiled and waved her towards one of the rocks placed to serve as stools for the permanent table. “I’m not going to smite you, so relax. I am Cathak Tunenke, and my lovely compatriots are V’neef Setaket-” the green woman “-and Anjei Sachie-” the large one “-and we’ve been sent by the Heptagram to examine a ruin that’s said to lie in this area.”
“A… ruin?” she repeated dumbly, then realized: “The Wind Temple!”
“Hm?” Lady Anjei said, looking mildly interested.
The Headman gave her a scorching look, which she returned impudently. Did he really think he could lie about that to an Exalt? When Lord Cathak leaned forward to rest his elbows on the table and prop his prominent chin on his interlaced fingers, she turned to give him her full attention. She’d be married out of the village anyway, and the Headman had no way of affecting where.
“Tell me what’s said about this temple,” he ordered her.
“What’s said is that the Singing Eagle, a great god of the winds, accepts offerings and tribute there, and that he can protect travelers and destroy the wicked. But the way there is…” carefully, Sisa explained the route up the river and over the glacier to the stony ridge that led up the to the mountain, and then the climb to the temple itself.
“Sisa, you know that the way is forbidden to-” the Headman started, but she interrupted.
“I haven’t! I just climbed the Five Stones hill and traced the route!”
“What you just described can’t be less than two hundred li,” Lady V’neef pointed out sceptically. “You say you saw everything you just described by looking from…”
“Five Stones is perhaps a hundred and seventy-five li as the eagle flies,” the Headman said, “but, reckless and disrespectful as she may be, the girl’s eyes are keen enough to make good her boasts.”
She didn’t stick her tongue out at him, but it was a near thing.
*******
For my part, I noticed that I had four Solar characters that I'd be putting together once I had the new corebook - almost an entire circle - so I figured I'd create another and make it a full set.
...and then I started wondering why I should wait...
"In one dimension I find existence, in two I find life, but in three, I find freedom."
-- Foreman Domai, Cadet Induction Ceremony, Mission Year 2216
She’d always had sharp eyes, the sharpest anyone in the village had ever seen. She could pick out a goat on the slope of the mountain across the valley, or identify which fox was taking which route towards the cavy pens, or count the petals of a blossom from across the high meadow.
She loved to look up and watch the birds - the hummingbirds flitting between flowers, the flycatchers darting after their pray, the slow graceful circles and arcs of the eagles and lammergeiers soaring on the mountain updrafts.
Dreaming of how it would feel to fly, free of the chains of the stony slopes.
Her mother, of course, beat her whenever she caught her looking up and out with that look in her eyes; people who thought like that tended to walk out along the edge of the Razor Rock and try, and none of them had ever walked away. Certainly her cousin hadn’t.
She couldn’t blame her mother for being scared, and she knew very well that, dream as she might, she couldn’t fly…
But she still dreamed.
Now, secure in the knowledge that it was the wrong time of day for wolves and the wrong time of year for eagles, she lay back on the huge, sun-warmed boulder at the top of the highest meadow with her poncho spread on top of her for warmth and her arms crossed beneath her head while the alpaca grazed and she stared up into the blue infinity of the summer sky.
The flaw was there, a linked scatter of dark dots, blurred even to her eyes by distance, high above the highest cirrus clouds.
“Sisa!” a treble voice called, setting the livestock to bleating. “Elder sister!”
She sat up and looked over at the notch where the path up the cliffside came out into the meadow as her little brother scrambled into view. “Capac?” she asked. “What’s happened?”
“Exalts!” he gasped, and hauled himself upright to wave his hands so excitedly his poncho fluttered around his body even in the still between gusts. “Five of them, and lots of bearers and they’re at the village and they want to talk to everybody so the headman says to bring the stock in and hurry!”
She felt her own eyes go wide, and she had to shake her head sharply to clear the startlement from it enough to whistle the three sharp tones. The herd stopped where it grazed, furry heads coming up from their grass and swiveling to look at her with ears erect and alert, and when she repeated the whistle most of them began to drift together, clustering under the rock into a fluffy, irritated mass of wool.
A few animals, highly placed in the herd heirarchy or just hungrier than their siblings, stubbornly kept grazing, and she slipped the poncho back on properly over her dress and hopped off of the boulder. “Help me get them gathered up,” she ordered her brother, and between the two of them only a little chasing was needed to guide the reluctant alpacas back into the herd.
The boy started down the path first, leaving the animals to follow single-file down the narrow, twisting ledge and her to bring up the rear, descending the thousand yards or so to the hollow that sheltered the village, overlooking the tumbling white waters of the river and the crops terraced along the valley floor, the late spring flowers and shoots bright against the dark stones and earth.
When they got to the village, and had shuffled the herd into the enclosure - hemmed in by dry-stone walls - set aside for it, their fellow villagers had all gathered around the common square, which was full of porters and packbeasts and, despite what Capac had promised, only three Exalts, all dressed in jade armor of one design or another over clothes of finely ornamented silk, already stained and battered by the dust of their climb up from the foothills.
The leader had hair of shining gold and brilliant scarlet eyes, and he lay back in a sling chair with casual ease, his legs stretched out under the table that groaned - figuratively, it was stone - with the best feast the village could put out on such short notice. The Headman perched uncomfortably on another chair - Sisa knew he had to have been ordered into the seat, or that would have been an unforgivable insult - and was talking to him at length. From the gestures, describing one pass or another, so the Dragonbloods would be moving on.
The other two were both women, one so massive that she’d settled cross-legged on the stony ground to put the table at the right height. Her cloud-white hair was cut to hang only to her jaw, her shoulders, under the jade plate that shrouded them along with the rest of her figure, were as broad as any field laborer’s, and her stunningly lovely face was set in an expression whose utterly disinterested blankness could only be both habitual and deliberate. She ate without so much as a glance at the conversation happening only a few feet from her.
The last of the three seemed to fade into the background next to the vibrancy and sheer presence of her companions, a pretty, quiet woman with long green hair and pupil-less green eyes who would obviously rather have been elsewhere, even as she politely thanked Hipa for bringing her a mug.
Corralling Capac from running to gawk by means of a firm hand hanging onto his collar, she threaded through the crowd to slide in between her brother and his wife and their mother. “Why are they here?” she asked, since the noble visitors were obviously genuine Exalted.
“They’re-” her mother started to say, before one of the Headman’s sons ran up.
“Mother Hapac, where- Sisa! Come on, the Exaltations want you!”
“Me?!” she blurted, too shocked to be more coherent. But he gestured furiously, so she went, running with her poncho flying and her sandals slapping the ground.
“Ah!” the headman said as she pounded up. “Here she is. Great Lord, this is Hapac Sisa. Her mother is one of our finest weavers, but she herself has the sharpest eyes our village has seen in living memory. If you wish keen mortal eyes to supplement your own holy ones, you wish for Sisa.”
The leader hummed meditatively, scarlet eyes seeming to glitter like sunlight scattering off of dark water in the brightness of the daylight as he studied her for several long, terrifying moments before he smiled and waved her towards one of the rocks placed to serve as stools for the permanent table. “I’m not going to smite you, so relax. I am Cathak Tunenke, and my lovely compatriots are V’neef Setaket-” the green woman “-and Anjei Sachie-” the large one “-and we’ve been sent by the Heptagram to examine a ruin that’s said to lie in this area.”
“A… ruin?” she repeated dumbly, then realized: “The Wind Temple!”
“Hm?” Lady Anjei said, looking mildly interested.
The Headman gave her a scorching look, which she returned impudently. Did he really think he could lie about that to an Exalt? When Lord Cathak leaned forward to rest his elbows on the table and prop his prominent chin on his interlaced fingers, she turned to give him her full attention. She’d be married out of the village anyway, and the Headman had no way of affecting where.
“Tell me what’s said about this temple,” he ordered her.
“What’s said is that the Singing Eagle, a great god of the winds, accepts offerings and tribute there, and that he can protect travelers and destroy the wicked. But the way there is…” carefully, Sisa explained the route up the river and over the glacier to the stony ridge that led up the to the mountain, and then the climb to the temple itself.
“Sisa, you know that the way is forbidden to-” the Headman started, but she interrupted.
“I haven’t! I just climbed the Five Stones hill and traced the route!”
“What you just described can’t be less than two hundred li,” Lady V’neef pointed out sceptically. “You say you saw everything you just described by looking from…”
“Five Stones is perhaps a hundred and seventy-five li as the eagle flies,” the Headman said, “but, reckless and disrespectful as she may be, the girl’s eyes are keen enough to make good her boasts.”
She didn’t stick her tongue out at him, but it was a near thing.
*******
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